That’s right. After years and years of linear writing, never moving to the next scene until I was done with the one before, I have finally done what I was sure I’d never do: the “more here” prompt.

This here is what I just now wrote:
***more conversation here***
Because the guys QUIT TALKING right in the middle of a dang-blasted conversation, and I’m too mentally wiped to just push through it so I says to myself, I says, “SCREW IT” and wrote myself a prompt to put more talking in when the boys decide what the fudge cake they want to say.

My crit partners are a bad influence O_O

Written by Ally Blue


Ally is a rich and famous author of hot gay manlove. She travels the world in her private jet, being waited on hand and foot by her team of pretty young men who bring her umbrella drinks and make out for her pleasure . . . Okay, so that's her dream life. Her novels of Manlove & Angst are mostly written in her living room, in between working at the Evil Day Job and doing Mom Stuff. Oh, the glamorous life of an author!
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"I finally did it…" was published on November 6th, 2007 and is listed in Ally Blue.

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Comments on "I finally did it…": 2 Comments

  1. Jet Mykles wrote,

    LOL! Welcome to the club, baby! I’d never get any ms done if I didn’t use those *** HERE *** marks :)

  2. Kimber wrote,

    Bwuahahahaha! Welcome to the dark side. Wait till you start writing the scenes all out of order. Lol!

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