That’s right. After years and years of linear writing, never moving to the next scene until I was done with the one before, I have finally done what I was sure I’d never do: the “more here” prompt.
This here is what I just now wrote:
***more conversation here***
Because the guys QUIT TALKING right in the middle of a dang-blasted conversation, and I’m too mentally wiped to just push through it so I says to myself, I says, “SCREW IT” and wrote myself a prompt to put more talking in when the boys decide what the fudge cake they want to say.
My crit partners are a bad influence O_O
Written by Ally Blue
Ally is a rich and famous author of hot gay manlove. She travels the world in her private jet, being waited on hand and foot by her team of pretty young men who bring her umbrella drinks and make out for her pleasure . . . Okay, so that's her dream life. Her novels of Manlove & Angst are mostly written in her living room, in between working at the Evil Day Job and doing Mom Stuff. Oh, the glamorous life of an author!
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Jet Mykles wrote,
LOL! Welcome to the club, baby! I’d never get any ms done if I didn’t use those *** HERE *** marks :)
Link | November 7th, 2007 at 8:05 pm
Kimber wrote,
Bwuahahahaha! Welcome to the dark side. Wait till you start writing the scenes all out of order. Lol!
Link | November 13th, 2007 at 12:53 pm