Comments on: revision: week three http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/ The Hottest Gay Romance Authors Are Here... Fri, 21 Nov 2008 02:22:59 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5 By: L.M. Prieto http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-227 L.M. Prieto Fri, 10 Aug 2007 06:21:17 +0000 http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-227 Thank you :) Just wait until you get to the end of chapter two ;) Thank you :)

Just wait until you get to the end of chapter two ;)

]]> By: Kimber http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-225 Kimber Wed, 08 Aug 2007 17:23:34 +0000 http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-225 What a fantastic first line! I am in awe. Seriously, I just adore a first line that grabs me by the wrist and drags me into the story. And your prose is absolutely elegant. "Bleeding sunlight" ... Wow. Just, wow. What a fantastic first line!

I am in awe.

Seriously, I just adore a first line that grabs me by the wrist and drags me into the story.

And your prose is absolutely elegant. “Bleeding sunlight” … Wow. Just, wow.

]]> By: L.M. Prieto http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-214 L.M. Prieto Sat, 04 Aug 2007 06:10:30 +0000 http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-214 Thanks Laura :) No one yet. I'll babble excitedly when it does get accepted somewhere (and when the revision is finished ;). Thanks Laura :)

No one yet. I’ll babble excitedly when it does get accepted somewhere (and when the revision is finished ;).

]]> By: Laura Baumbach http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-213 Laura Baumbach Sat, 04 Aug 2007 05:53:47 +0000 http://www.fictionwithfriction.com/2007/08/02/revision-week-three/#comment-213 Wonderful, scary build-up, Luisa. Who is publishing this? LooseId? I need to know where to buy it! Wonderful, scary build-up, Luisa. Who is publishing this? LooseId? I need to know where to buy it!

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